I WANT CRITIQUES!!!!!

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EGHAD!! Inking a comic in OC takes alot more time than I had expected....
I'm currently experimenting on monochrome shading, and I'd be so happy if you folks would tell me what you think of this one.
Is the lighting sufficient? are the characters showing enough? should I make the 5th panel red? etc etc etc and annything helpful you can think off!

This is page 2 of 4. This short story will go in my portfolio later, so it's important i get as much feedback as possible.
Thanks in advance!

Page 2/4 of a short comic I'm making for my portfolio.
I'll be uploading the finished piece when it's done.

Because I couldn't resist drawing it. :D

I've had the site on with the music going ON and ON and ON and ON and On an on and on and on and ON and On and on and oN and onnnnnnn......


I just can't get enough of it. ^^

Mr Jones is one of those movie heroes every goddamn child and adult knows about. :D
And with Han solo, this makes Mr Harrisson Ford one of my favorite actors EVAR!!!! ^^


Ok, so it doesn't look like him one bit. WHO CARES! He's got the hat and whip, that's enough to know who it is! D:



.....2 months is too loooooooong! >_<

Today's lunch...

Remember kids: Always save your work regularly.....